tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7214751923446681405.post933974530675226738..comments2024-02-27T09:10:24.266-08:00Comments on Year Six Mersey Vale: 2 A sentencesY6 MVPShttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11524774706769679137noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7214751923446681405.post-41773849754017224792015-01-27T13:10:55.680-08:002015-01-27T13:10:55.680-08:00Great adjectives. Check the whole sentence; does i...Great adjectives. Check the whole sentence; does it make sense? Miss MY6 MVPShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11524774706769679137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7214751923446681405.post-4247312170676378782015-01-27T08:28:41.411-08:002015-01-27T08:28:41.411-08:00really good sentences well done every onereally good sentences well done every oneruhbannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7214751923446681405.post-1464358750289058672015-01-27T07:01:50.154-08:002015-01-27T07:01:50.154-08:00When I was walking down the spooky yet long path, ...When I was walking down the spooky yet long path, when I saw a hunched, menacing ghost.<br /><br />From AH And AHY6 MVPShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11524774706769679137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7214751923446681405.post-15375795302943364252015-01-27T06:58:35.602-08:002015-01-27T06:58:35.602-08:00The ruined, ramshackled mansion with its derelict,...The ruined, ramshackled mansion with its derelict, destroyed roof was waiting for me.<br />S.M A.U<br />Y6 MVPShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11524774706769679137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7214751923446681405.post-62736832155229425702015-01-27T06:58:30.045-08:002015-01-27T06:58:30.045-08:00This comment has been removed by the author.Y6 MVPShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11524774706769679137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7214751923446681405.post-46260636118868527552015-01-27T06:57:40.076-08:002015-01-27T06:57:40.076-08:00Crawling up the walls were the prickly, bloodthirs...Crawling up the walls were the prickly, bloodthirsty nettles and venomous, menacing ivy of Evermoor Manor.<br />APY6 MVPShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11524774706769679137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7214751923446681405.post-47978417649891925042015-01-27T06:57:07.260-08:002015-01-27T06:57:07.260-08:00The menacing, threatening porch was covered with b...The menacing, threatening porch was covered with bizarre, lifeless bushes. NB.Y6 MVPShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11524774706769679137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7214751923446681405.post-68335386054689286112015-01-27T06:53:51.149-08:002015-01-27T06:53:51.149-08:00Behind the anonymous, dead neighbourhood stood a h...Behind the anonymous, dead neighbourhood stood a haunted,menacing manor. IZ.Y6 MVPShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11524774706769679137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7214751923446681405.post-27032846298382603062015-01-27T06:46:03.525-08:002015-01-27T06:46:03.525-08:00Very good 2a sentence Leighton
HassanVery good 2a sentence Leighton<br />HassanY6 MVPShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11524774706769679137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7214751923446681405.post-77423939461314384332015-01-27T06:45:14.535-08:002015-01-27T06:45:14.535-08:00I love maths test. A.cI love maths test. A.cY6 MVPShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11524774706769679137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7214751923446681405.post-38428804606446082552015-01-23T13:08:38.998-08:002015-01-23T13:08:38.998-08:00Wow Year Six
Really impressed with all your descr...Wow Year Six<br /><br />Really impressed with all your descriptive sentences Miss Mather must be really pleased with your work.<br /><br />Miss WildingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com