Who? Jay,A KFC chef .......Dr Scott, an English professor........Trainee doctor Miss Marcheva
What? has been jailed.........has been sent home........has failed the exam
When? Four thousand years ago................when she was four years old...........five minutes ago
Where? Near the city of Manchester............ In the Arctic................................In New York
Why? For vandalising....... for disturbing the polar bears ........ for ignoring traffic signals
Jay, A KFC chef, has been jailed in New York, five minutes ago, for ignoring traffic signals. by Harry
ReplyDeleteTrainee Doctor, Miss Marcheva, failed the exam when she was four years old, somewhere near Manchester, as she did not practise. Sumayya
ReplyDeleteFor disturbing the polar bears, Dr Scott, an English professor, was sent to jail five minutes ago, in the Arctic. by Aisha + Imaan
ReplyDeleteFor disturbing the polar bears, In the Arctic, Dr Scott, an English professor, was sent to jail nearly four thousand years ago. by Sumayya :)
ReplyDeletetrainee doctor Mrs marchiva, has been arrested for disturbing the polar bears four thousand years ago
ReplyDeleteThis is well structured but Year Six, what has Ruhban forgotten?
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DeleteFor protesting against his firing from the MVPS Christmas production, Harry L, was arrested, on MVPS school grounds, 2 seconds ago (literally).
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For ignoring traffic signals, near the city of Manchester, trainee doctor, Miss Marcheva, has been jailed five minutes ago.
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For disturbing the polar bears, in the Arctic four thousand years ago, Trainee doctor Miss Marcheva had failed her exam.
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For vandalising when she was four years, Dr Scott, an English Professor has been jailed in New York.
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