Staring at the silent,silver web, an isolated, starving beast caught my attention. Ronnie
Following the shrill, haunting echo, I found myself watching a mischievous, morose ghoul howl in pain. Zion
Climbing the cold, lifeless stone, I turned round to see the mysterious, booming lightning had set fire to the tree behind me. Victoria
Catching my eye in the corner of the room, a long yet slender shadow crept and boomed a shrill, haunting shout. Ali
Hearing the loud screming eco, ring out into the dark mistey night i truned and ran.Elias
Stomping up the creaking,wooden steps, I came across a lonely, mysterious shadow next to the window. Abbas+Y6
The lonely mossy pillars stood together like an army with mysterious silent shadows behind them. Tayybah +y6
Hi Year sixGreat work on writing 2A sentences.using noun phrases to create really haunting sentences.Ms Wilding
Silently and quietly, curious yet scared I came across a mansion with a line of birch trees standing like an army.
A line of old, mossy pillars stood beside the derelict, eerie mansion. Abdurrehman Qasim yr 6
Intriguingly yet cautious, facinated yet scared, a flash of light caught my eye and seemed to be winking at me!Year7 Yara xo
Staring at the silent,silver web, an isolated, starving beast caught my attention. Ronnie
ReplyDeleteFollowing the shrill, haunting echo, I found myself watching a mischievous, morose ghoul howl in pain. Zion
ReplyDeleteClimbing the cold, lifeless stone, I turned round to see the mysterious, booming lightning had set fire to the tree behind me. Victoria
ReplyDeleteCatching my eye in the corner of the room, a long yet slender shadow crept and boomed a shrill, haunting shout. Ali
ReplyDeleteHearing the loud screming eco, ring out into the dark mistey night i truned and ran.Elias
ReplyDeleteStomping up the creaking,wooden steps, I came across a lonely, mysterious shadow next to the window. Abbas+Y6
ReplyDeleteThe lonely mossy pillars stood together like an army with mysterious silent shadows behind them. Tayybah +y6
ReplyDeleteHi Year six
ReplyDeleteGreat work on writing 2A sentences.using noun phrases to create really haunting sentences.
Ms Wilding
Silently and quietly, curious yet scared I came across a mansion with a line of birch trees standing like an army.
ReplyDeleteA line of old, mossy pillars stood beside the derelict, eerie mansion. Abdurrehman Qasim yr 6
ReplyDeleteIntriguingly yet cautious, facinated yet scared, a flash of light caught my eye and seemed to be winking at me!
ReplyDeleteYear7 Yara xo