Monday, 26 January 2015

2 pairs sentences

How do you write a 2 pairs sentence Y6?  This is what you did today.....

Quietly and carefully, amazed yet anxious, she entered. Ruhban

Tearful and fearful, anxious yet curious, he approached the steps.  Harry

Nervously and anxiously, careful and afraid, the moon howled like a pack of wolves at sundown. Aisha

Anxiously and quietly, slowly yet excitedly, he approached the steps. Hasan

Relieved yet anxious, curious and afraid, he met a mansion. Izzy

Petrified and tearful, curious and confused, she heard a noise: tap…tap…tap! Aribah
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  1. Y6 MVPS27 January 2015 at 06:39

    As quiet as a mouse he silently and cautiously, intrigued yet petrified, he stepped onto the creaky ancient floorboards and slowly heard and ear-splitting creak....creak...creak.
    AP

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    1. Y6 MVPS27 January 2015 at 06:44

      Whoops I forgot to take the second he out in my sentence.AP

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  2. Y6 MVPS27 January 2015 at 06:40

    Quickly but carefully, afraid yet curious, she ran across the garden. IZ.

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  4. Y6 MVPS27 January 2015 at 06:43

    Very good description of the noise Aribah.
    Hassan

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  5. Y6 MVPS27 January 2015 at 06:44

    Confused yet curious, anxious and afraid, she spotted a flickering light

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  6. Y6 MVPS27 January 2015 at 06:44

    SI

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  7. Y6 MVPS27 January 2015 at 06:45

    Petrified and tearful, suddenly and silently, he met a mansion.
    I.a

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  8. Y6 MVPS27 January 2015 at 06:46

    Tearful and fearful, slowly and silently he approached the steps.SI

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  9. Y6 MVPS27 January 2015 at 06:47

    Carefully and silently, terrified and confused, he approached the steps. NB.

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  10. ruhban27 January 2015 at 08:15

    carefully and petrified, terrified and confused she heard a noise: Tap...tap...tap

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  11. Anonymous27 January 2015 at 09:43

    Starving and freezing, afraid and alone, she lay there asleep on the floor. It was really helpful learning sentences like this. They will help us in all our writing. IZ.

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  12. Saskia9 February 2015 at 03:44

    Sorrowfully and truthfully, anxious and scared she reviled her dark secret.

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