choose two nouns
form a sentence
and modify each noun with two carefully chosen adjectives.
Here are some of our sentences so far...
The top
floor of the anonymous,
menacing mansion
could be reached by a weak,
rotten oak staircase. Red group
There were thick, thunderous clouds in the silvery steel, deserted sky. Maria
Walking into
the secret, haunted
ballroom we saw the heavily patterned curtains. Mariyah
Inside the
manor there was a lit,
melting candle and
a colossal, ancient
chandelier.
Hassan
The unusual, blinking clouds above the ancient, mysterious mansion were blinking at me. Aribah
Below the menacing, unusual staircase, stood a lifeless
anonymous table. Saira
Below the mouldy, damp curtains, lay a carpet of decomposing, lifeless bugs. Leighton
Beneath the wooden, spiral staircase stood a lonely, precious piano. Aisha
Wow Year Six
ReplyDeleteReally impressed with all your descriptive sentences Miss Mather must be really pleased with your work.
Miss Wilding
I love maths test. A.c
ReplyDeleteVery good 2a sentence Leighton
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Behind the anonymous, dead neighbourhood stood a haunted,menacing manor. IZ.
ReplyDeleteThe menacing, threatening porch was covered with bizarre, lifeless bushes. NB.
ReplyDeleteCrawling up the walls were the prickly, bloodthirsty nettles and venomous, menacing ivy of Evermoor Manor.
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ReplyDeleteThe ruined, ramshackled mansion with its derelict, destroyed roof was waiting for me.
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When I was walking down the spooky yet long path, when I saw a hunched, menacing ghost.
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Great adjectives. Check the whole sentence; does it make sense? Miss M
Deletereally good sentences well done every one
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