Monday 30 November 2015

2A sentences.

Can you use noun phrases to create really haunting sentences?

11 comments:

  1. Staring at the silent,silver web, an isolated, starving beast caught my attention. Ronnie

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  2. Following the shrill, haunting echo, I found myself watching a mischievous, morose ghoul howl in pain. Zion

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  3. Climbing the cold, lifeless stone, I turned round to see the mysterious, booming lightning had set fire to the tree behind me. Victoria

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  4. Catching my eye in the corner of the room, a long yet slender shadow crept and boomed a shrill, haunting shout. Ali

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  5. Hearing the loud screming eco, ring out into the dark mistey night i truned and ran.Elias

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  6. Stomping up the creaking,wooden steps, I came across a lonely, mysterious shadow next to the window. Abbas+Y6

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  7. The lonely mossy pillars stood together like an army with mysterious silent shadows behind them. Tayybah +y6

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  8. Hi Year six

    Great work on writing 2A sentences.using noun phrases to create really haunting sentences.

    Ms Wilding

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  9. Silently and quietly, curious yet scared I came across a mansion with a line of birch trees standing like an army.

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  10. A line of old, mossy pillars stood beside the derelict, eerie mansion. Abdurrehman Qasim yr 6

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  11. Intriguingly yet cautious, facinated yet scared, a flash of light caught my eye and seemed to be winking at me!
    Year7 Yara xo

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