The Blue Bird
In a bear leafless tree, on a windy night, a blue bird was
busy competing with her neighbours . Flying to the ground, to and fro, she was
collecting sticks, twigs and feathers, clutching them in her claws. Even though
the tired blue bird had been working for half an hour, her pitiful nest was
getting smaller and smaller!
Exhausted, she flew back to her nest and saw it was getting tinier
and tinier...
SPLAT! SPLASH!
“Ooooo! Look at that beautiful blue bird.”
“Yes, but it is yellow!”
Unfortunately the bird had landed in a pot of yellow paint.
You have used a range of ways of starting sentences which makes your tale interesting to read girls! Well done. Miss M
ReplyDeleteWow Mariyah and Aribah
ReplyDeleteBy Nafisa
I really thing you to have done really well, you sat down and you thought really well!
ReplyDeleteBy Izabella
We really enjoyed writing our 100 word challenge, with Miss Mather and we hope we get to do it again. Mariyah
ReplyDeleteThe 100 word challenge really made us think about our writing and reading it back to made sure that it made sense.
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