In 793 AD,
on the South coast, we decided to build the ‘Dragon’ longship. Ruhban
Using timber
and wool, we built our thirty metre long longship. Harry
After
powering through the storms on the rough sea, we arrived at the English island
of Lindisfarne. Arran
With a heavy
heart, I decided not to burn down the monastery at Lindisfarne. Jack
We set sail.
Who can add an adverbial phrase? How, when or where did you set sail?
We set sail.
Who can add an adverbial phrase? How, when or where did you set sail?
Hi year 6
ReplyDeleteGood to see you have come back and ready to do some fantastic work with Miss Mather, I know your going to have a great time in year six.
Miss Wilding
At 3:00 am in the morning,we set sail
ReplyDeleteWell done Saskia.
ReplyDelete5 table points!
Next time, remember your full stop!
Miss M
Off the Kaupang coast, we set sail.
ReplyDeleteBy Umair
Excellent Umair! Five table points to you too.
ReplyDeleteBecause I felt bad , I didn't burn their holy monastery.
ReplyDeleteA great subordinate clause, but....who are you?! Miss M
ReplyDeleteYou are not Hamzah! His post is below. Who are you?
DeleteClaim your 5 table points! Miss M
Thinking hard, I decided to choose "Serpent" a thirty meter longship, construction time 8-9 months and number of crew 50 people.
ReplyDeleteSumayya
A good subordinate clause Sumayya. You have been working hard on this in class! We will edit this in class to make it a grammatically correct sentence! 5 table points :-)
DeleteThinking hard, I decided to choose "Serpent", a thirty metre longship with a construction time of 8-9 months and a number of crew of 50 people.
DeleteAll of Y6: :-)
During summer, voyaging across the North Sea with my dragon longship also with fearless Berserkers ready to slaughter and conquer.
ReplyDeleteposted by Hamzah
Great vocabulary Hamzah. You actually have a few subordinate clauses here and still need a main clause on the end to make it into a grammatically correct sentence!
ReplyDeleteMiss M
During summer, voyaging across the North Sea with my dragon longship, also with fearless Berserkers ready to slaughter and conquer, we set sail.
ReplyDeleteY6
At 3am,in the morning,in Norway,in the town of Kaupang,after building my dragon lonship,we set sail
ReplyDeleteHarry
Loads of subordinate clauses Harry well done but what is missing off the end?! 5 table points!
ReplyDeleteIt took a very long time to get blogger up so I had to use my ipad
Deleteduring summer I built my thirty metre long ship by the help of a sail maker
ReplyDeleteOh and thankyou for the five table points miss
ReplyDeleteSetting sail on the way to the English island of Lindisfarne, we crashed on to an island.
ReplyDeleteBy Izabella
In winter, on a stormy night, we set sail to burn down Lindisfarne. Nafisa
ReplyDeleteOn February 793AD at Froyer, with a Berserker, we built a timber 30 metre longship including 50 crew members.
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