Wednesday 28 January 2015

Personification

I can use personification to create atmosphere.

Personification is when you give non-living things life-like qualities.


Bellowing through the tall treacherous trees, the wild wind approached.  Saskia

Screaming, the wind darted through the relaxing mansion. Leighton

Charging like a bull towards me, a treacherous, thunderous, snowstorm raged. Ibraheem+Hassan


The windows leaned within the mansion’s walls and peered straight down at me. Hamzah

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  1. Charging towards me like an angry bull, the wind was preventing me from entering the mansion. IZ.

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  2. Answering her calls of cry, a breeze of wind comforted her. IZ.

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    1. The snowflakes were dancing all around me before settling down on the ground. IZ.

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  3. Hi Year 6

    Great work on learning about using personification to create atmosphere.

    Great job

    Miss Wilding

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  4. The bees played hide and seek with the flowers as they buzzed from one to another.
    The river swallowed the earth as the water continued to rise higher and higher.
    At precisely 6:30 am my alarm clock sprang to life.
    The waffle jumped up out of the toaster.
    When the DVD went on sale, it flew off the shelves.
    The news took me by surprise.
    Lightning danced across the sky.
    Traffic slowed to a crawl.
    The moon played hide and seek with the clouds.

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  5. The stars danced playfully in the moonlit sky.
    Opportunity was knocking at her door.
    The tornado ran through town without a care in the world.
    My life came screeching to a halt.
    Time creeps up on you.
    The hare laughed at the tortoise.
    The news took me by surprise.
    The sun smiled and chased away the angry clouds.
    Pushing my way though the bushes the wind whispered in my ear. :)
    IT

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