Wednesday 4 February 2015

Great writing following the recipe. Now it's time to redraft!

4 comments:

  1. i enjoyed reading Aribah and Nafisa's writing because they followed the recipe and read through their writing carfully plus they edit it carefully (thumbs up)

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  2. I think Aribah and Nafisa are really grate partners they work really well together, as well as that I really enjoyed reading theirs because I though it was really descriptive in all ways. :) IT

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  3. Also i loved the start of the story where they used a 2A, a 2 adjective, sentence.

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  4. Hiii it's Ayah it's great seeing friends having fun ;D Hope your all enjoying Year 6! Miss you :P

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