Friday 23 January 2015

2 A sentences

We've been writing descriptive sentences that we could use in a description of a horror/spooky setting this week. We had to:
choose two nouns
form a sentence
and modify each noun with two carefully chosen adjectives.

Here are some of our sentences so far...


The top floor of the anonymous, menacing mansion could be reached by a weak, rotten oak staircase.  Red group

There were thick, thunderous clouds in the silvery steel, deserted sky.  Maria

Walking into the secret, haunted ballroom we saw the heavily patterned curtains.   Mariyah

Inside the manor there was a lit, melting candle and a colossal, ancient chandelier.
Hassan  

The unusual, blinking clouds above the ancient, mysterious mansion were blinking at me.   Aribah

Below the menacing, unusual staircase, stood a lifeless anonymous table.  Saira

Below the mouldy, damp curtains, lay a carpet of decomposing, lifeless bugs.  Leighton

Beneath the wooden, spiral staircase stood a lonely, precious piano.  Aisha

11 comments:

  1. Wow Year Six

    Really impressed with all your descriptive sentences Miss Mather must be really pleased with your work.

    Miss Wilding

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  2. Very good 2a sentence Leighton
    Hassan

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  3. Behind the anonymous, dead neighbourhood stood a haunted,menacing manor. IZ.

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  4. The menacing, threatening porch was covered with bizarre, lifeless bushes. NB.

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  5. Crawling up the walls were the prickly, bloodthirsty nettles and venomous, menacing ivy of Evermoor Manor.
    AP

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  7. The ruined, ramshackled mansion with its derelict, destroyed roof was waiting for me.
    S.M A.U

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  8. When I was walking down the spooky yet long path, when I saw a hunched, menacing ghost.

    From AH And AH

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    1. Great adjectives. Check the whole sentence; does it make sense? Miss M

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  9. really good sentences well done every one

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