Friday 27 March 2015

A very persuasive letter by Amaar

Dear Dad,
                     Dad, our caring dedicated father, imagine me doing what you want me to be doing every day, imagine everyone in the house with smiles on their faces, imagine your children playing happily and working with joy. Do you want this? Yes? Then I suggest that you should generously purchase more games for my console (PS4).
The first reason why you should get us more games for my console is because most of our games are quite boring like, Destiny, Minecraft, Fifa 15, Fifa 14, Knack and Lego Marvel Superheroes. The more games you get me, the more work I shall do. For example, if you get me Need For Speed Most Wanted then I will do as much work until you say stop. Do you want me to be like that? If you do, I think you should purchase more games. Despite the fact that the games I have are definitely quite boring, sometimes I enjoy playing them. 
Another reason why you should get me more games is because I am working hard for my sats by doing sats revision at home and I do booster every week and I’ve done tuition which was extremely long. Long because it was 6 hours a day which is very exhausting; I think I deserve something for my hard work such as more games for my PS4.
In contrast, you might think that I might get addicted in games and that I won’t do work anymore or maybe I will stay upstairs on it every day while not spending time with the family but I assure you that whatever you want me to do, I will do it. I promise you that if you get me more games I won’t say it is boring 100%.

In conclusion, if you want me to not be bored on the play station, if you want me to do more work at home, if you want me to be happy, then I think you should buy more games for me!!!   J  

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