Tuesday 21 October 2014

Diary entry 4 by Umair

Today we wrote our 4th and sadly final diary entry completely independently. Umair has made great progress!

3 comments:

  1. Umair has done really well in his writing because his writing is highlighted. He has done onomatopoeia, similes, started a sentence with a verb and done the correct punctuation.

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  2. Umair good work I see you have made progress

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  3. Umair has included extremely hard work and in his writing he included
    Adverbial Phrases
    Correct Punctuation through out
    Verbs
    An Embeded clause and Umair has made an awful lot of progress.
    Hassan

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