Wednesday 27 November 2013

100 wc musomic

MusoMic 100 Wc AAAHHH! RUN! The...The... The monster. As the wind rustled, Hunk, the monster, roared like an ambush of tigers looking for their pray. Bill, a teenage boy, with his friend Lucy, were scared as ever. Charlie, Bill’s friend, got a phone call, from bill... “H...H...HELP! Charlie, we need help come to the haunted house down the street.” As soon as possible, Charlie arrived Bill was gone... Charlie found a torch, “mysterious” he said. He went in the Haunted House he was terrified, at first but then he was brave enough to enter the haunted house. BUT THEN... HT & AM

1 comment:

  1. A very powerful simile boys and some cleverly structured sentences too. Well done.

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