Wednesday 27 November 2013

MUSONIC 100WC

CREAK...CREAK...CREAK went their betraying footsteps across the dilapidated floor in the neglected house. Suddenly, the ground shook like a hurricane was only in one house. It wasn’t there in the abandoned room that looked like it was a sewer. As soon as possible we dashed out like an arrow aimed at one thing; the doors closed. It was there; looking at us his were eyes full of betrayal. Help was on its way. Azaam , who was a dark cloaked man, peered at us through is petrifying eyes. The doors were gammed despair air was trapped knocking on the window we couldn’t get out! Rohan & Abubakker

2 comments:

  1. Great adjectives with 'dilapidated' and 'neglected' boys. Check your grammar/ punctuation in the final sentence!

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