Friday 8 November 2013


A chunky child called Tom. Tom was sprinting as fast as he could to the park, just before he came across something in the, dirty old and green pond.

He was thinking in his little brain what is that. He thought it was someone in the water drowning. He was confused. What should I do he thought.

Tom was an expert at swimming. So he decided to jump in the freezing, rusty pond to save him. He took his jumper off and dived in the water to save him. He rescued him and found out it was a big doll.

 

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