Wednesday 27 November 2013

Musomic 100wc Mohammed&Azeem

The Disastrous Day As the old, brown door opened to them, their footsteps hit the floor. The ground shook. One footstep stepped into the haunted house. The wind ushered them in, BANG.... the door shut; at this point it was too late for them to escape. As the cloak released from the ugly thing, his letters spun down the stairs like a typhoon. “GET OUT OF HERE,” “LEAVE,” the letters bellowed. The window shot open; out of nowhere, a boy flew in. WSHHHH. With him, he had a sharp knife on his back. He shouted, “I’m the only one that will save you.” MIM AQ

1 comment:

  1. A like your personification of the wind and your sentence structure in the sentence, 'With him, he had a sharp knife on his back.'
    Keep it up!

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