Thursday 14 November 2013

Remembrance Hasan 100WC

Remembrance As the wind rustled heavily, all the brave survivors, who fought in the war, were painfully hurt. Boom... all the survivors fought like wolves hunting their food. As people ran for their lives; tanks that were destroying, stuff, destroyed everything. Run! Everyone shouted; everyone was so scared they had to run. There were so many injuries: hearts broken; gun shots and many scars. All people had to move away to be safe. But all the plants were destroyed, except a red and beautiful flower: the poppy. After the war, everyone now stands in a circle. They stay quiet for 2 minutes. They wear a poppy.

1 comment:

  1. Great higher level punctuation and a simile too. EBI....embedded clauses.

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