As the wind rustled, Tom, the brave young teenage boy was
running as fast as he could when suddenly a storm was heading his way. He could
see a steep stream. As he dived into it the storm went over him...
As he was getting up
his friend passed him saying “where were you i was out every where looking for
you?”
“The storm didn’t you see it was heading my way i jumped
into this stream to save my life.” said Tom while floating around like a baby
in the stream.
“We better get home” said Tom in laughter.
BY AK
BY AK
I like your idea Awais. Your opening sentence is quite gripping.
ReplyDeleteEBI...remember punctuation within speech marks.